1）How should I start writing the opening for the composition?
2)什么是经验？
3)If I were to write a visit to the orphanage as an activity, yet I have never been to an orphanage,I do not know the experiences and activities done there. How then should I write my composition? I do not have many ideas for this topic.
Actually you should not write anything that you have not been to. The safest bet for you will be the school CIP programmes that you can write about. Think about the rationale, the process, the things you learnt and your thoughts.
1.How to increase my length of composition?Evan if i write about my experience of my own cip activities not enough words.Do i have to write some make-up activities to lenghten my composition? 2.What is MDAS(muscular dystrophy association of singapore in chinese?
Excuse me Mr Chew, does the subject topic permit me to use fictional sets of events, like Darius suggested? Because in my school life, I have only attended a few CIP programs that can relate to this topic, and I'm not sure what to write that supports this topic for CIP programmes like mass-cleaning of the cemetary outside our school. In any case, can you help me with what what to do in this case? Or can you tell me how to form a good compostion "skeleton" for a CIP Programme such as mass-cleaning and other menial work that still keeps within the boundaries of the question? Thank you.
周老师，
ReplyDelete1）How should I start writing the opening for the composition?
2)什么是经验？
3)If I were to write a visit to the orphanage as an activity, yet I have never been to an orphanage,I do not know the experiences and activities done there. How then should I write my composition? I do not have many ideas for this topic.
你好！
ReplyDelete经验：经过了的一件事所得到的体验（experience）
Actually you should not write anything that you have not been to. The safest bet for you will be the school CIP programmes that you can write about. Think about the rationale, the process, the things you learnt and your thoughts.
Happy writing!
:)
周老师，
ReplyDeleteDo we need a specific timing for the composition?
我们需要一个组成具体时间？
E.g. Being present in school by 8:15am
1.How to increase my length of composition?Evan if i write about my experience of my own cip activities not enough words.Do i have to write some make-up activities to lenghten my composition?
ReplyDelete2.What is MDAS(muscular dystrophy association of singapore in chinese?
当然了，记叙文需要6大要素：
ReplyDelete1、时间
2、地点
3、人物
4、开头
5、经过
6、结尾
伟善：
ReplyDelete当然不好写虚构的内容。
其实不难，这里有一个建议的结构～～
1、学校为了让我们能够更了解不幸的社会阶层，特别为安排了一次社区服务计划之旅，到“肌营养不良协会“（MDAS）
[这里就介绍了地点和记叙文的开头]
2、那天我们做了准备（形容一下，例如节目表，礼物，职务……这里可以写很多内容哦……）带着半犹疑半兴奋的心情向目的地出发……
3、形容一下地方和（人物），也顺便描写在协会做的事情与（经过），看到什么有趣或特别的现象……［这里也很多东西可以写哦］
4、我的（感想）与得到的一些（启发）……“这次的学习之旅让我发现了自己属于非常幸运的一群…………虽然无法抽出长期时间常常到访，但是却从中得到人生许多宝贵的经验…………希望自己能够“
［这样就应该写很多了］
Excuse me Mr Chew, does the subject topic permit me to use fictional sets of events, like Darius suggested? Because in my school life, I have only attended a few CIP programs that can relate to this topic, and I'm not sure what to write that supports this topic for CIP programmes like mass-cleaning of the cemetary outside our school. In any case, can you help me with what what to do in this case? Or can you tell me how to form a good compostion "skeleton" for a CIP Programme such as mass-cleaning and other menial work that still keeps within the boundaries of the question?
ReplyDeleteThank you.
周老师，
ReplyDelete这跟题目没什么关系。可是我想问，l've been working at my father's shop last November / December (2009) . Can this be use to get CIP Hours ? Thanks .
周老师，
ReplyDelete这跟题目没什么关系。可是我想问，l've been working at my father's shop last November / December (2009) . Can this be use to get CIP Hours ? Thanks .
老师，
ReplyDelete我写作时，是不是因该写成“我参与了社区服务活动”而不是“我参与了社区服务计划”吗？
谢谢，
翔乐
mr chew ,
ReplyDeletei follow your format you gave to vincent ,
i still cannot reach the word count leh ;o
how sia .
LOL .
志贤：
ReplyDelete最好不要用虚构的内容，好像你说的清理墓穴的活动其实也是一种。说到活动意义，每个人都各有所获，也没什么是最好或最不好的内容。
只要你当时有什么想法都写出来就可以了。
也许劳动的活动menial能够让我们明白工作的重要性。此外，我也认为我们生长的环境太过于舒适了，以至我们不懂保持环境的重要性。例如国人乱抛垃圾，清除墓穴旁的垃圾也许也能让我们意识到饮水思源的重要性……其实很多东西可以讲的，看你怎么组织了。
Magikenji:
ReplyDelete我想好像是不行……还是想想学校的吧！
翔乐：
ReplyDelete应该是计划里的一个活动，题目只不过简写罢了。
Ju:
也许你还得再深刻一点的思考才行，不然来找我，说不定可以有所启发。
By the way, Mr Chew, when they say "最近", can the event happen 2 years ago? because thats' what I wrote about.
ReplyDelete志贤：
ReplyDelete当然可以，只要是自己亲身体验的就行。加油！:)