Thursday, January 07, 2010

实用文一

呈交日期:
4C
4F: 11-1-10


问题:

繁忙时间的地铁班车常常拥挤不堪,
试以搭客身份写一封信给地铁环线经理反应问题,
并提供建议解决。

参考词汇:



1、环线:circle line
2、东北线
3、东西线:East west line
4、一趟
5、拥挤:很多人、很挤
6、准时
7、避免
8、滋味
9、服务素质
10、优先座位
11、名声、名誉
12、宗旨
13、水泄不通
14、有效
15、准时到站

建议内容(8分):
1、表明身份⋯⋯搭客
2、写信目的⋯⋯反应一些问题
3、说明事情⋯⋯拥挤让人很不好受
4、影响⋯⋯乘客没有愉快经验、礼貌、服务问题
5、建议⋯⋯增加班次、更大的车厢、
6、恭维⋯⋯服务人群的精神
7、希望考虑⋯⋯让大家都有舒适的搭车环境
8、谢谢

我是贵地铁公司的搭客。今天写信给您,主要是想谈谈我在实用地铁环线
的一些问题⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯

8 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:57 PM

    Mr Chew can you give us brainstorming questions about the next lesson on the blog, so that we won't waste too much time for brainstorming during class time.
    And, CL paper 2 is still poorly done, can you give me some word of advise?
    - Hean Ming - 4F

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  2. Anonymous10:07 PM

    Mr Chew can you also post main topics to brainstorm on?
    - Hean Ming - 4F

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  3. 试卷二⋯⋯唯一方法就是阅读和不断的练习
    课外书必须多做了

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  4. 周老师9:28 AM

    下次的课题:

    新加坡人的健康课题

    甲型流感

    政府扮演的角色

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  5. Darius(3) 4C9:44 PM

    Mr Chew,

    What do these words and points mean?

    4、影响⋯⋯乘客没有愉快经验、礼貌、服务问题
    5、建议⋯⋯增加班次、更大的车厢、
    6、恭维⋯⋯服务人群的精神
    7、希望考虑⋯⋯让大家都有舒适的搭车环境

    Thank you

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  6. Hi Darius:

    4、影响⋯⋯乘客没有愉快经验、礼貌、服务问题
    consequences of the effects... like the passengers will not get a pleasant experience in the rides, affects the notion of courtesy as well as the quality of service that our trains are providing.

    5、建议⋯⋯增加班次、更大的车厢、
    suggestions: increase the frequency of trains, bigger carriages to service more people...

    6、恭维⋯⋯服务人群的精神
    words of formality... spirit of service to the people from the authorities.

    7、希望考虑⋯⋯让大家都有舒适的搭车环境
    for your consideration.... let all passengers to enjoy a comfortable environment in the trains

    Happy "assignmenting"!

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  7. Darius(3) 4C10:12 PM

    周老师,

    1)What do you mean by the notion of courtesy?

    2)愉快经验 : pleasant experience?

    3)恭维 : formality?

    4)建议 : suggestions?

    5)增加班次 : increase the frequency of trains?

    增加 : increase?

    班次 : frequency?

    6)What do you mean by the frequency of trains?

    7)车厢 : carriages ?

    8)精神 : spirit?

    Are the chinese words I mentioned correct?

    谢谢
    Get well soon!(Unable to phrase it in chinese)

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  8. 周老师9:45 AM

    治豪同学:

    1)That means that courtesy should be something we are concerned about, as it should be equivalent to a better quality society

    2-5: you are absolutely right!

    6)Well if there are more passengers, increased frequency should be able to ease the congestion.

    7-8: you are absolutely right again!

    Thank you for your concern.

    Just making opportunity of the greeting: 祝您早日康复

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